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Saturday 24 August 2013

The skin

WALT: write a story with a theme “always take care of your skin.”


In 1998 once there was a little girl that got itchy.  She couldn't  control herself stop scratching.  Her name was Maria.  Maria didn't have a mum or dad only one sister and two brother.  Maria went to her older sister call Catherine.  Maria said to her that she is starting to get itchy.  Catherine said where did you go Maria said that she fell in the trash.


Catherine said go and have a bath OK then come back.  
So Maria went to have a bath.  When Maria finish having a bath she came walking to her sister and Maria said finish.  Catherine said to don't come closer because you might get itchy.  So Maria went and touch her and said why are you crying.  Catherine said that
she got the itchy bite.  So Maria call the two brothers that they got the itchy bite.  So the boys said that they got it to.  


Then Maria said to the boys to go and have a bath at your room because she have a bath.  So the two boys ran to there room.  And Maria told Catherine to go to her room
and have a bath.  So Catherine ran to her room to go  for a bath.  So Maria went to her room.  So she waited and waited and it was 7.00 O’clock pm.  So they came to Maria’s
room and said thank you.  Maria said you should thank Catherine she was the one that
told me to go and have a bath.  So Catherine said no thank you for telling us to go for a bath.  So maria said your welcome so Maria went and hug them.  Then Maria got itchy
so Catherine said to go for a bath.  So Maria ran to the bathroom.  And Catherine and the two boys were laughing.   

 

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